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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Do coupons and group-buy deals make us be smart consumers? Nowadays,lots of manufactures give out coupons and sponsor group-buy deal activities to promote their products.Many students suppose that it is a good way for them to save money by using coupons and group-buy deal activities.In my opinion,when we use coupons,indeed,we can save a little money.But in the long term, it has no good for us to be smart consumers.The following are my reasons. To begin with,when we hold a lot of coupons,we are likely to use them purchase something we don't need.Sometimes,some students do not need buy clothes,because they already have enough ones.However, they decide to buy that just because when they use coupons the price is lower and they can save a bit of money.Secondly, some coupons and group-buy deal have time limit,which means we couldn't buy something at anytime.Sometimes,it is inconvenient,and we seem to spend more much money at present,which would use our money in the future.And I think it is not smart for us to use our money in advance. In a word,coupons and group-deal can not make us be smart consumers.Although in the short time,we can save a little money.However,in the long time,we seem to spend more much money. So,we need be sensible when we treat coupons and group-buy deal.
