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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Date:Dec.25th,2013 Dear grade one students, Do you like autumn outing?Do you want to open your horizon? This week we will hold an autumn on Dec.27th,if you have interests,please enter name before this Thurday in the Student Union.According to the schedule,firstly,we will assemble at the school at 7. am that day.Then,we will visit the botanical garden and watch the exhibition of THE PEOPLE AND NATURE in the moring.If you would like ,you can leave your baggage in the left. And then,in the afternoon,we will visit The Summer Palace,which you can see beautiful scene.In addition,we will be back at 6.pm.At last but not least,you have to get prepare for the lunch. Wish you have a nice trip! sincerely, The Student Union
