小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best friend is PE teacher.she has long blake hair,two blake eye and a read mouse.she likes reading and play pingbang.she has a beautiful bike.she likes ride bike.she likes learning languge.I think she is good for diference languge.she told me her brother was very smart a yong man.our classmates like her very much.