2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

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Can we be a smart consumers by discounts? As students, we get money from our parents more than earn money by ourselves, so I think it is collect for us to save money by reducing the unnecessary spending. As a result, it is essential for us to be a smart consumer. However, being a smart consumer, we shouldn't be keen on coupons, group-buy deals, on sale products because not all these cheep products really deserved buying. Take the group-buy deals as example, we usually deal in group-buy product on Internet. The shopkeepers put their products' snapshots on net and we can get the detailed information about the products. We take it for granted that the pictures about the products directly give us the real information, we think poorly about the reality of the products. I once dealt in a group-buy hot pot . The information on the Internet were listed clearly and the pictures of the food did attractive, however, after my friends and I dined in that restaurant , we assured that we would never come back to have meals there. The hot pot we had in reality was far different with the group-buy information it showed on the Internet. It doesn't deserved such spending though it seemed cheap on the Internet. In other words, the information on the Internet have me cheated. So you can see, you want to be a smart consumer through saving money but you may probably step into the trap you never imagined. All in all, we can't be a smart consumers merely by buying products with discounts. We should sheer up our eyes, keep our eyes on the quality of the products instead of the fare only.