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How to be a smart consumer With the development of the social ,more and more people are fond to spend their time to shop、travel and do whatever their want to do. In addition ,you must to learn how to spend your money proper and how to be a smart consumer to save money .where i stand is that you should have a strong sense of what you real need . There are two reasons following .The first is most significant that when you want to buy something you have to distinguish whether this is your need or just a interests.The last,you can save some money from the discount.when you want to shop something in the day but it's very expensive. so you can not do that until it in a low discount.
