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回复：Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事，不能前往，表示歉意。
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DATE:JAN.7th,2014 Dear Mr.Wong, Firstly,I am deeply moved that you invite me to your son's one year-old party.You tell me the time is fixed on June 10th,in which in HUANG JIA HOTEL.However,because I have to fly back to my country to deal with some emergency of my company, I feel very sorry to you that I can not attend the party. I hope you will understand and excuse my absence! Your sincerely, John Smith
