托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

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Nowadays,many people consider if one person won the competition,then the person would have been able to success. No matter they cheated other people, and lied to auditor,Because people get used to concluding the results from the appearance of the things. almost totally neglecting truth occasion.However,I don't think that is true. There are several reasons above the view, firstly, people Participating in sports in order to improve friendship and enrich knowledge.So,we should think of the spirit of the race rather than the honor of success.secondly,although he get achivement in the competition,but he adapt some cheated measures to attain the results. thirdly, some person failed to this race,but he is worth of respecting by sports fans.For example, a famous sport liu Xiang who injured in the significant competition but he insist to participating in Olipicgames ,finally, he failed to this race,but many people called him "hero" Because the spirit of Olipic games presents coperation and friendship. so,