2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；采用了一些简单的从句；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

For some people,success seems so hard to rearch.many people struggled in way lead to success.and rare are finally acheive their goals.most of them are still finding the answer.but for me,success come for one reason,working hard and hard. success do not follow a path,so there is not a certain thing you can find to acheive it.But you can work hard,learn more,action more,then oppotunity appears,success occur. Like the old philosophy said:"only hardworking can make you a success".And as we all know,the world's most successful people all go through with a hardworking adolescence,even now they still keep a hardworking habbits.