2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As we all known,with the development of economy,more and more people spend the money on the education. From the chart,we can catch the information that the higher education you get the more you earn.We can focus on the people who have less than high school diploma get the pay so little just about 451 every week,on the other hand,those people who have a professional degree or doctored degree earn more than 1500 per week,that is about 4 time than that people. what we can draw a conclution we should pay more on our education if we want to get a higher pays .