可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词;文中拼写错误稍多,并请注意词汇拼写的检查;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
The good listen can respect each other and improve the undrstand and have a good realatonshipwith each other. the parents can listen to their child and dismiss the ditch. the teacher listen to students can learn students better and meet the need.The students listen to each other can keep a god realationship and help us eath other.But how to listen is a isue which has a heated debate during the years.Students can expres themselves accornding to their opions.