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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段。
With the rapid development of the life and social changes,richer people became more than before. As college students,we have much money to do things we like. Many girls spent money for dressing and eating.Many boys used it for purchasing products of high-techonlogy and playing games.It is a good matter to increase consumption.But when we took money whether we consider how our parents earned it . Fruglity is one of the traditional virtue in China.So I think we are careful with our money in daily life is acceptable . On the one hand,we pay attention to our ability in learning and we have no time to earn much money .some products just share their packages with high price,some intend to keep their profile through advertisement in the market.So we often have a mistake called impulse buying.On the other hand,collecting money is helpful to have a good habit.We must develop a great habit in our life about consumption.
