高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者词汇量积累很好，学术词汇积累要重视；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

I was born in Beijing, and I grew up in Beijing too. In my memory, Beijing had fresh air,clean water and many friendly people . When I was 8 years old, my sister was born.My family hadn't enough money for giving lots of good food to both us, but children were happy all day and all night. We lived in an old building that many people lived there together.We had to use a public washroom and kitchen, but we didn't feel annoying. If neighbors got some interesting things, for example someone went fishing and came back with fishes,we always shared them. But it isn't now. Beijing has a bad environment.It has had cars more and more, and then the traffic has been bad. It has had big house more and more,and then people haven't known each other.It has had factories more and more,and then trees and lawns have had reduced.So though there are many big buildings,supermarkets,factories and companies ,and we have had many money to buy something we want to get. So which one should we love more?