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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From:hubin@163.com Date: To:KPOHSales@hotmail.com Subject:To establish business relationship Dear Sir or Maden, I am writing to you to express my appreciation.The new products called 5670 your company exhibited during the NewYorkon Novermber 15th~Novermber 22 th imperssed me a lot .I am strong interested in it.So, Not only do we hope you can give us the price and instruction but also establish business relationship .Looking forward to your reply. Best regards, Yours sincerely, Hubin
