高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；连词使用偏少。

I am from chongqing. ten years ago ,my hometown is very beautiful. That time, green trees over there, many fish in water,the river is clear,people hard working,and building is smaller than then. But now building is high than before, more and more cars,fewer and fewer trees.Industry leading to the deterioration of the environm.Governance environment is more and more important