2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

A strong will may help a person get access to success.It's the basis of success,to a great extent,I think. From my perspective,I'm not the kind of person like that.On the contrary,there is little strong will in my heart.Once facing with difficulties,I lack confidence and also strong will.I'm afraid of obstacles.So at last,I cannot do anything at all.I'm a loser at times.From the history,the person with a strong will can finish great mission.A strong will does good to their work. At the same time,it's the same to us students.We need a strong will to study hard,to explore new knowledge field,to study advanced scientific technology and so on.We use it to become a great person like Edison.Thus,it's necessary for us to have a strong will from the bottom of our heart.