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As we all know,people all around the world have different dialects in their places.To our Chinese country , there are many kinds of dialects among different cities, especially in counties. But, when we in public places, i think in order to make better communication , we should speak public language. If someone uses his own language,i think there must be difficult to communicate with others. For one thing, the modern society has wildly used public language and in our Chinese country , we call it Putonghua which we all understand. This is easier to learn each other.For another, if some people encounter something and need some help, but he speaks his own dialect , i think this must be so troublesome to learn that man. As far as i am concerned, we should spread the public language using. Of course, speaking dialect is not influenced most of others.Maybe speaking dialect is accustomed to you, but , in my opinion , so as to get better understand , we should not use dialect as far as possible .