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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10530
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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用户练习作文:

As we all know,people all around the world have different dialects in their places.To our Chinese country , there are many kinds of dialects among different cities, especially in counties. But, when we in public places, i think in order to make better communication , we should speak public language. If someone uses his own language,i think there must be difficult to communicate with others. For one thing, the modern society has wildly used public language and in our Chinese country , we call it Putonghua which we all understand. This is easier to learn each other.For another, if some people encounter something and need some help, but he speaks his own dialect , i think this must be so troublesome to learn that man. As far as i am concerned, we should spread the public language using. Of course, speaking dialect is not influenced most of others.Maybe speaking dialect is accustomed to you, but , in my opinion , so as to get better understand , we should not use dialect as far as possible .

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