高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I am a girl from pengzhou city,This is a small city in Sichuan province,Pengzhou have many traditional buildings and snacks,So do not see this city is small but has many differnet things,Pengzhou also have famous landscape such as danjing mountain,most of visitors from different places come Pengzhou to visit,because there have many beautiful peony.Of course there is a good place to go sighting In evening,if you have a spare time ,you can go to center park of Pengzhou,because in evening there is bustling with noise and excitement,such as you can see children skating in the spare space,and senior citizen dance in center of park! That is so lively Welcome to our hometown Pengzhou!