题目要求:
Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解:
报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段:开头
第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力
第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压
第四段:结尾
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Nowadays, people are corncering about the quality of life. Undoubdtly,the quality of life in our city is decreasing.There are so many factors affect the qulity of life.Let us anasisy the deeply reasones.Moreover, i will recommend some solvuion to address the problem. To commence with, city has been polluted in many aspects, such as air, soild, water ect.