2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误；可以适当增加副词的使用。

As can be seen from the picture that people have high degree will have high earning and unempploment rate is under the average. As the saying;knowledge is energy.The degree higher than Bachelor's ,the earning is higher than average $797 ,the college who havn't degree and degree lower than Associate ,the unemployment rate is higher than average 7.9%.I think the reasons waht cause this phenonmen are fllowes. First of all.The social acquire more an more intellengers to do many things to fit the development.What's more ,the cmpete among company is more fierce,to make the company stronge the need many great deal to acqure thier advise and skill,for this reason ,the manager will happy give the high degree people high salary.