小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i was born a small city ,from a village ,i like my grandmother and grandpa,although he was gone,but the memory remain in my heart .the time looks like a flow water ,it's so fast ,fortune no one can change ,the god had assign to everyone .so we must be changed by the time,