2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? Nowadays,more and more children are becoming dependent on their parents,their friends,or other people. On one hand,parents would like to manage every thing for their kids,even some tiny things that are not important at all.They think that their kids cannot deal with problems specifically.On the other hand,a great number of children don't have confidence that they can do the task well.They don't trust in their abilities, So,parents should always help their children cultivate good confidence in kids themselves and shape excellent characters.It's very useful and necessary.Also,parents had better encourage their kids to do things on their own instead of depend on teachers or parents.I think it's vital to be independent.