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THE MOST IMPORTANT PERSONAL QUALITY OF A UNIVERSITY STUDENT In recent days,almost all the youny people will come into university.Our country give more opportunities to these people who will enter the college.And our parents give more supports and change the main ideas than before.There are more and more universities appeared in recent years.They give more choices for us to choose the majors we like.The chance to enter the college is important.But how to be a real and good university student is the most important thing after we enter the university.In my opinion,to be knowledgeable and friendly is the most important personal quality we should learn. As we all know that the main idea that we enter the university is to learn more and be a knowledgeable people.In this society,the knowledge is the only choice for the company to choose the people they need.And also we know that knowledge is the main key to come to the rich life and a peaceful country from the history we had experienced.Only we have knowledgeable we can beat the bad people and the countries which want to hurt us and our country.So the knowledgeable is very important.As for the other quality,friendly,it is the basic weapon for us to beat the bad men.Only we treat others good,others could treat us good.Friendly does not means afraid someone.It is the best stage to show your strong heart and good inner polite.We can not image that when we should ask for help from others.But if we treat others good,we can have the first opportunity to get help.And also to be friendly is the oldest quality that our old people taught us. All in all,we university students should try our best to learn more and be friendly.If we have such personal qualities,we can do a lot of things we want and be a big potato.These two personal qualities can teach us to be the people that our society need.We can build a new world by ourselves.Our country need this kind of people.So our university students ,just do it and believe in ourselves.
