作者词汇量积累需要继续努力,尤其学术词汇还有很大提升空间,另外拼写检查还需加强;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意文中的几处句子错误。
Due attention should be given to spelling nowadays , more and more students don't pay a attention to spelling in Enlish learning. it's true that the spelling is no longer as optimistic as before. there ara various reason responsible for this embarrassing phenomenon. for one thing, with the rapid development of technology,every student has a computer. when they communicate with their partner through the internet and they use simple word replace what they want to say. for another thing, many teachers highlight excessively grammer and communicate, they ingore spelling. one og essencial sme teacher think spoke point is important than everything . to solve this problem, i think many measures must be taken to cope with this phenomenon. on the one hand, teachers shouldchange their mind and attach important totheir student's spelling; on the other hand, students should improve their spelling in the daily life. in conclusion, teachers and students shoula cooperate with thir studies.