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From:wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date:Dce23rd To:Mr.Johnson To E-mail:sales-department@hotmail.com Dear Mr.Johnson We are retend your company 3000 produces on Dce22ed,but according to our signing of the No.35 order.We know the produces should be 3500,but now have espect 500 produces we dont rentend .Please check your conpany product list.We are looking forward to your company early reply! Wish! wanghaiyang