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学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
As Information Technology is developing faster and faster, Online Shopping is also becoming more and more popular. Many people can buy what they want without going out. Some shopping platforms such as Taobao, Jingdong and Yixun have developed very large.They even host a Shopping Festival on December 12th to attract more customers to devote to shopping on their website.That shows that Online Shopping has not only become a fashion, but also a kind of culture.However, behind the bright situation, some problems have appeared. Because we can only see the products through pictures before we get them, we can not assure whether the quality of the products if really as good as the introduction on the website says.Although most big company seldom sell bad products to the customers, when it comes to then middle or small business company, their credit is doubtful.Some people even use the bug of the Online Shopping system to steal the customers' money. Therefore, it's important for us to distinguish what goods are reliable or false.We should choose the big sellers or those with good comments when we go shopping online.Don't let the "lower price" cheat your trust.
