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Some People Think that Financial Disparity Affects Friendship In recent years,we have improved a lot.Our country have improved a lot.Our china have improved a lot.We had got a big difference in many sections,for example,our economic and our life.We can change a lot through improvement.Our life could be changed and to be better than before.And also our friend will get changed .Some people think that financial disparity affects friendship.They may think that it is the biggest influence between friends,I agree with this opinion. First,about financial ,I think that we just need to be harder and harder.We should spent more time on our work and job.We have to face different people and give them a different impression.At this period,we can not have enough time to spent with our friends.We can not rush to them when they have some troubles.We can not have enough time to listen to them.We can not share happiness and sorrow with them.Time flies,we can not have the same topic with our friends.So it is ususl for us to ba apart from each other. Second,in this society,we can not choose the friends we like in our working life.Because we spent too much time with our parters.Even though we don't like some of them,we still should share a lot of time with them.We can not express our real emotions with them.But we can not leave them.We will accept them after some time.We must treat them good because we need to make a living. Finally,when we become rich,we may have a lot of friends,but when we bacme poor,there's only less friends around us.It is very common in our life.Some people may choose the useful friends to make.Some just want to make a heart to heart friend.We can't say it is right or wrong.We can just say we can make any decisions by ourselves. All in all,I just want to say,financial could change a lot.We may have diffetent kinds of friends due to our financial disparity.The only thing we should do is to keep a balance heart.Attitude decide everything.Just fllow our heart to do things.
