小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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As we all know, the friend is one of the most important pepole who eaxist our life.and everybody all have many friend and a kinds of friend. In my view,my best friend is lili who not only always help me but also has the same habits with me.lili has long back hair,thin boday,baeutiful sing .. As a old going said the friend is yourself .so l holp that l can play happle with lili forever .