2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。

computer and man With the development of the technolgy,a significant number of people are using computer.Did this issue should be encouraged?The reasons are as follows. Computer is essential to man.people are able to find the useful information from the internet immediately instead of searching large books or asking for teachers.Funny view or music also can be found on the internet which realx yourself when you are tired of working .other people are afraid of being addicted to the computer games.every year,there are 10 percent people are die of palying games.Therefor no one can aviod being the influence on the internet. Draw a conclusion,only should we use the right attitude to computer ,can lead the computer to make the difference for man.If we can make full use of the computer ,it would make us on the successful way.