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Education As A Lifelong Process Some people simply see education as going to schools or colleges, or as a means to secure good jobs.Our parents and teachers also tell us that study good is very important.We can get something we want throghg learning.Most people view education as a lifelong process. They treat education as a big progress in their all life.In my opinion,it is very important for us to learn all kinds of things and we should keep learning through our all life. First,we can notice that education is the always topic in our history.As for our old people,they had taught us keep learning is very important and we should stick to do this thing.Kongzi and Mengzi are the famous teachers in old days.They had taught us how to be a good learner and the ways to learn.Our parents and teachers had told us the importance of learning when we were still a young children. Second,in this world,we can not live without knowledgeable.In this period,our country need the people who have knowledge and have the confidence to learn the things they don't know.We had step into a new world and we will face a lot of new things and new ideas,If we can not have the decision to learn the things we don't know and just stay at the same place,we can't do a big thing as we want. Finally,knowledgeable is the most useful weapon for us to beat the bad things and bad men.We can learn a lot of things about various period and use these to build a new world as we image.Only have knowledgeable we could step into a new and high level.There are more and more challenges in our world need us to chanllenge and to face. All in all,we can't give up learning.Only through learning we could get the things we want and be a big potato.Just try our best to learn more and study more,so we can step into another level and face more challenges and more people.So education is a lifelong progress.We should keep learning all my life.
