小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I ha ve a g o od friend . Her name i s Lisa , she is thi rteen yeaRs old.she likes playing badmintan . she has b ig eyes and small nose.She has long hair,too.s he ofte n goes to school at7 o ,clo(k.like she very much of o f