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So great is the influence internet exerts on us, that we are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. As the computer technology is developing at an amazingly fast pace, it brings people plenty of benefits. On the other hand, it may also do harm to people. Here are some impact that internet has on people. First, human relationship tends to be impersonal. Nowadays, almost every family possesses a personal computer and it is quite convenient to communicate on the internet. As a result, people prefer to chat with net friend rather than with their neighbors. Next, people, especially teenagers, are easily addicted to chat on internet. Therefore, they are likely to be reluctant to communicating with their family, friends, and classmates. Some people are under an illusion that friendship on internet is somehow superior to friendship in real world. Hence, there are more and more coldness in human relationship. What’s more, surfing the internet for a long time will do harm to people’s health, such as pain in eyes and headache. Every coin has two sides. Although internet could affect people in some bad ways, the internet also enables us to communicate instantly with anyone in any part of the world. I can’t resist concluding this article with several kernels of advice: take control of yourselves when you are using computer; do not play computer hours after hours; take care of your health; never indulge in internet.
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