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as we all konwn, the word no is ofen used in our life.for example,when other people ask for us help to doing someting what is bad for us and the social. in this time ,we are supposed to say no ranther than yes. however,some people have diffierent view.such as a man who is a chairman have a great power,it is bad that to take the money from a peole of who want to use the money to take a bad thing. what do you the bad when we should say no but we not/ first,it could cure ourself and damand our life.then it is a bad example for our child.last but noe least,it manbe have a great bad effict on the nancture.so it is important for us to make a right choice to do .