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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1890
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
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as we all konwn, the word no is ofen used in our life.for example,when other people ask for us help to doing someting what is bad for us and the social. in this time ,we are supposed to say no ranther than yes. however,some people have diffierent view.such as a man who is a chairman have a great power,it is bad that to take the money from a peole of who want to use the money to take a bad thing. what do you the bad when we should say no but we not/ first,it could cure ourself and damand our life.then it is a bad example for our child.last but noe least,it manbe have a great bad effict on the nancture.so it is important for us to make a right choice to do .

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