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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3576
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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文中衔接词丰富;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;请作者在词汇丰富度,尤其是在学术词汇的积累上再接再厉;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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The pie chart below show data about the popularity of the six fast foods, in terms of hamburgers, pizza, French fries, fried chicken, tacos and sushi, recieved by the American teenagers. According to the pie chart, the hamburger is the most popular fast food for teenagers in the Amercia, accounting for 33%. This is followed by the second preferences called pizza at 26% of total fast food. Consequently, the French fries are given by the middle preferences for adolescents(22%). Finally, the percentage of the fast foods are made up of fried chicken(9%), tacos(7%) and sushi(only 3%), remaining the lowest occuption. Therefore, it can be seen from the pie chart, the popularity of hamburgers for the teens in the USA stand at the highest point. Meanwhile, the teenagers in the America prefer to eat the high-calories food.

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