2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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What's is important that parents should help their children to be independent.But this is the big problem that parents should how to keep their children to be independent.Today,more and more parents is caring about everything of their children.My point is that they should give more self-time to their children.As the time goes,we will give away from our parents,so wo should learn to do somthing by ourself.In American,children will make money by theirself when they are more than 18 years,maybe it's crule for us in China,but it's a good chance for us to become a little independent.In free time,we should do some free job which we like to do.