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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
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last week，the class discussed their plan for the spring outing in our school every year. some of them advised the amusement park, some of them want to go boating in park. At last, we dicised to climb mountain. there was a sunshine sunnday in the last week, our classmates went to climb the highest mountain named LUOJIA MOUNTAIN. we took many food with breads, biscuits, fruits and water. all of us were very tired but enjoyed ourselves very much. on the afternoon, when we intended to come back, we found a lot of rubbishes left by us on the floor. there were a bad thing. So we picked up them and put them into the bin.
