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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Last week，the class discussed their plan for the spring outing in our school every year. Some of them want to the amusement park, and some of them want to go boating in the park. At last, we decided to go climbing. It was a sunshine sunday last week. Our classmates went to climb the highest mountain named LUOJIA MOUNTAIN. We took much food with breads, biscuits, fruits and water. All of us were very tired but enjoyed ourselves very much. On the afternoon, when we intended to come back, we found a lot of rubbishes left by us on the ground. There was a bad thing. So we picked them up and put them into the bin.
