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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；句式变化较为不错，另外需加强句法练习。
As college students, we should pay more attention to use carefully our money and make a plan to control where we should spend and when we spend and why we spend. In my opinion, most of us, as students, we spend money witch was given by parents who work hardly almost all day and nigh. Indigent is the parent that not only gives what we need in materials but also love, carefulness and support. To repay our parents, beside studying hard , it is of significance that we save money. And how to save money? First thing we need to do is making sure what we really need or why we need. So that can we understanding clearly where our money go and how to cut down our cost. Second, we have to assume our own due responsibility. For example, if we are once in trouble, we'll maybe need some money to solve them, or we want to buy some presents as gift to our friends,all these we need money. Whenever , money maybe is not the most important thing in the world but it must is the way of supplying that we can gain something needed.
