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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Indepent Full love is given to children by their parent,which is a common phenomeno in the recent years as the past years!It seems that anything referring to their children can attract a absolutely attention for parents.Children are the compete hope,so parents are willing to do everything for their children,even are eager to do it! In order to make children know how to be indepent to do their own things ,parents should do as follow: First,leave the things children can finish and encourage them do it by themselves; Second,don't be afraid that children will be hurt,and should believe children can be to the best of their ability to do the better! third,should promote children to take part in some activities.to create an ability to find and solve the problem! In a word,parents should have a positive attitude on the problem of the independent of children!
