四川安岳县李家中学2012-2013学年八年级上学期半期试卷英语作文

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Thanks for your inviting，Happy birthday to you!I'd love to go to your birthday party，but I have too much things，so I can't go to.In weekends morning，I have to stady at home for English taste。In evening，I must go shipping wiht my sister ，Next day ，I have to visit my grandmother in the other country。I‘m sorry ，but next I’am bringing the best gift with you。