单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;有效的运用了一些复杂句;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Thanks for your inviting,Happy birthday to you!I'd love to go to your birthday party,but I have too many things,so I can't go to.On weekends morning,I have to study at home,because I have a taste next week。In evening,I must go shipping whit my sister ,Next day ,I have to visit my grandmother in the other country。I‘m sorry ,but next I’am taking the best gift whit you。