初中英语命题作文真题演练(60):假如你有一百万

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If I have one million，I will buy a big school for pool childrens be able to go to school，and i will be becomeing a rich wonman。I will be buy many colthes put in my big house。If I have one million,I will eat a big meal wiht my parents。And to study abroad。