2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者在句法层面做的很棒；作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

as the developing of society, a lot of problems has been appeared about food security, internet cheating, which indicated that confidence among people should be noticed. when we walking in the street, we can get a lot of posters,but we don't know that if it is true. in the personal developing, every people will compete a position, which cause competing each other, and not trust.