初中英语命题作文真题演练(60):假如你有一百万

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；可将文中部分短句合并为长句，注意文中句子错误；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

If I have one million，I will buy a big school for pool children be able to go to school，and I will be becoming a rich woman。 I will be buying colthes put in my big house。 If I have one million,I will eat a big meal take my parents。And to study abroad。