小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have many friends. Carol is my best friend. She has big eyes and black long hair. We knew each other at our age of 8.When I made mistakes, she always point them out. We share something to eat when we are at school and enjoy movies together when we at home. We made a oath that we would be together forever.