3. 参考词汇:代沟―generation gap
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How are you these days?I'm writing to you my trouble with my parents. Recently,I meet with too many difficulties in communicating with my parents.They have so high expectations to me that I am having too much stress.Furthermore,they frequently compare neighbor's child with me well which makes me very frustrated.At weekend,I can't watch TV or surf the Internet just because I am a student of eleventh grade.What's more,in their opinions,chatting with girls is a bad performance.Adimttedly,what they do is to make me more outstanding in my studies,however,I really can't accept their behavior in controlling me.As far as I am concerned,generation gap is the biggest problem between my parents and me.Dear uncle,how much I am wishing you can talk with my parents about their educational method,could you help me?I will be very thankful to you if you would persuade them to change their mind in educating.