行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查。
It is hot discuss that reading selectively or extensively in the daily life. Some people think that reading should select.On the one hand it is good for the people.In the other hand the unfavirable book can appear. Other people have different view.They beive that reading should be extensiveed.beause it not only enrich the kwonage but also improve the skills. In my oppion,raeding selectively and extensively are all important for us.First,when we read book we can choice this what we are interested in.then if we don't kwon what book we should read,it is key that reading extensively.I beive that if we to do that we can become a rich man in the kwonage area.