2013年5月18日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:关于学历史

熟练使用了一些长难句；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

People in nowadays living more realistic, most of them care about what can be used immediately than what can be leaned from.So it is important for publics to learn history escpicilly for children. To begain with, draw lessons from history, one know dynasties changed. To study history can let we know the world deeply.For exmple, we could know what the human race have suffered and where the peaceful world come from that can teach people to treasure .It is can also improved the ablity of judgement, because the history can point out the right wy of us when we are confused. The most significant value of history is to spred the culture and civillization by the generation, it is the evidence and the footprint of human development. As the wold changed, although to study history is important for us, we cannot to use the old thoughts and attitude to solve all of problems, the right thing we can do is learn from the history ad find the new solutions.