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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(121):建设和谐社会

发布时间:2014-01-13 17:46浏览次数:430
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江西师范大学附属中学网站(http//www.jxsdfz.com)开辟“建设和谐社会”论坛,请你围绕这一主题,根据下面所提供的信息,用英语参与论坛。
1.人与社会:祖国、家乡、学校
2.人与人:家人、师长、同学
3.人与自然:能源、环境、动植物
4.你的态度:(内容由自己拟定)
注意:
1.论坛稿必须包括以上信息内容,可适当发挥;
2.开头、结尾已给出;

3.词数120左右(开头与结尾不计入总词数)


Our government is aiming to build a harmonious society. I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal. As high school students, what should we do? 
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Our government is aiming to build a harmonious society. I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal. As high school students, what should we do? First of all, we should love our motherland. We should also care our hometown and our school. Secondly, let’s fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also learn from each other, care for each other and help each other. More importantly, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life. Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass. As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above. Let’s start work now and do what we can to build a harmonious society!

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