文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend. She is a pretty girl. She has long black hair, two big brown eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better. She is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books, playing computer games and chess. She is also nice. She often helps us. Our classmates like her very much. She is a naughty girl. She likes mischief very much. I do very much love her.