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Dear Jame Im very happy that The Mid-Autumn festival is coming.This holiday is very popular in China. The Mid-Autumn festival has a lang history,long long ago Chinese people are feast the holiday.And this is unique to the Chinese traditional festivals.In the holiday people will eat The moon cake with these family.And with family have dinner.The best interested thing is look at the light moon with family in evening.That's so happy. Welcome you come China!